# Pastebin baIViDwr It is a big issue for lots of authors 17:16 You are hardly alone in it. Hell, I fuck it up myself/ 17:16 Usually when I'm correcting the stuff I work on with Aki. 17:17 He mostly writes in a sloppy present passive and it's a pain to convert to past active. I miss shit a lot when I do that 17:17 It helps to read it out loud and make note of where you are stumbling 17:17 and reading it out loud TO someone 17:17 If you just read it out loud to yourself, you will start to mumble and skip stuff 17:18 Make sense? 17:19 < > Yes, but its hard to read it out to someone when their not interested in it. Or if its a super quiet place like a library (I do my work during college hours in the library when I have the chance) 17:20 Oh yeah, I totally understand that. 17:20 What might help is to look at something when you're reading it. Mouth the words, as if you're reading it to an empty chair 17:21 If it helps, picture someone like me sitting in that chair. Or an english professor. 17:23 < > I... think I get what you mean? 17:24 You need to actively engage to turn off the portion of your brain that gets blind to stuff 17:24 Because your mind KNOWS what you're trying to say 17:25 But when you actively engage a different portion of your brain to read aloud to someone, it stumbles over translating what is in your mind vs what is on the page 17:25 Actively engaging this way will help a whole lot. 17:26 This is what I mean when I constantly yammer on about reading shit aloud.