# Pastebin 72dEPKtB CharlesAlweiz> DrAkimoto: Mostly cause I wanna start small with my stuff and work my way up. This SCP I'm wanting to pass isn't some huge game changing thing. It seems normal, but yet has these strange attributes. For my first one I want to show that I can 7:26 PM Since, from what I understand of SCP, it doesn't HAVE to be some out there completely strange... thing 7:26 PM <•DrAkimoto> CharlesAlweiz: okay so personally the anomaly doesn't do it for me. That said Im not every reader on the wiki so I will move past it. what you need is a solid narrative, I know that gets annoying to hear lol trust me I do, but what it means is you need enough of a story going on that it hooks the reader's interest. And since "interested" is what you want your reader to feel you need to do it in spades. So listing off the 7:26 PM different addendums you want isn't enough you need to have a compelling story to tell in the shady alley of yours 7:27 PM Nice. 7:27 PM <•DrAkimoto> More than cool situations to show 7:27 PM i was about to say the same thing lol 7:28 PM (╯° °）╯︵ ┻━┻ idk what else to add then 7:28 PM Like I'm at a complete blank 7:28 PM I've added literally everything under the moon I can think of 7:28 PM <•DrAkimoto> CharlesAlweiz: it says youve been working on his a month 7:29 PM And ive seen you in here pitching it to people 7:29 PM Maybe this idea isnt ready yet 7:29 PM Put it on the backburner and come back to it with a clear head 7:30 PM We all have drafts we didnt finish we are saving for when we have more idea 7:30 PM Everything I've ever wanted to do is on the back burner. There's literally no more room 7:30 PM install more ovens 7:30 PM errr stovetops? 7:31 PM I'm just done 7:31 PM ⇐ Popsioak quit (~Mibbit@C8E2754E.7F34837C.8A85E092.IP) Quit: http://www.mibbit.com ajax IRC Client 7:31 PM Just bite the bullet and drop this current one, its hard to find new ideas but some are just not winners man, you just gotta keep on trucking and look for insperation 7:32 PM <•RockTeethMothEyes> N0One: And finished. 7:32 PM and? 7:32 PM <•RockTeethMothEyes> And while I like the idea, I don't like the draft. 7:32 PM is it Sh*t 7:32 PM <•RockTeethMothEyes> It's not great. 7:32 PM well like Doc said, take a step back to clear your head, and then revisit different ones every so often and see if you can generate new ideas 7:32 PM <•RockTeethMothEyes> To elaborate 7:32 PM this one was supposed to BE my winner. I've put so much brain power into it that being told to drop it or put it away is just absolutely crushing 7:33 PM I'm just glad you're honest 7:33 PM ← CharlesAlweiz left (~cgiirc@synIRC-89141E53.client.mchsi.com)